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Honestly, I was not able to read past through chapter 1. The writing feels a bit off and needs work. Just a lot of tense issues and grammar issues that you will want someone to look at. The dialogues were fact-paced and confusing. I hope you will edit them. I will check this once in a while to see if you have edited it or not, and then review it properly.

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Duality or destiny?

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Monarch_Of_Death
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At least after looking for a while, I saw an interesting and nice review. That's a great help although not much.