The first chapter was very dialogue-heavy and I am confused who was talking. Haha 😂 lol but anyways. How about introducing your characters after he has a dialogue or part in the dialogue. Like said Min Ji. A friend of our protagonist who was an ex of his best friend. I know you will introduce them later on. One by one but it was just a suggestion from a reader to the author. You are the author so you have the power to turn the tides if you want. Now to the review, Nice relatable characters and not dull. Good execution of dialogues by the way..haha. The story progression was nice and steady. So far so good! 👍 Kudos and good luck! 😉
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LIKEThanks for the suggestion! But I didn't introduce them to make a confusion and also curious in your mind so that you will continue reading the rest of the story!😊😊 Thanks for your review and also thanks for reading my book. Please continue reading so that I can be encouraged to write the whole story. Thanks again!
Bunny_Junnie:Thanks for the suggestion! But I didn't introduce them to make a confusion and also curious in your mind so that you will continue reading the rest of the story!😊😊 Thanks for your review and also thanks for reading my book. Please continue reading so that I can be encouraged to write the whole story. Thanks again!
Mel_Aniv:You are welcome! And I am sure yours will become popular soon! 😉
Too much confusion would make readers stop reading the story. But as long as you could make the book interesting at the same time balance the mystery, it would be great.
Bunny_Junnie:Thanks for the suggestion! But I didn't introduce them to make a confusion and also curious in your mind so that you will continue reading the rest of the story!😊😊 Thanks for your review and also thanks for reading my book. Please continue reading so that I can be encouraged to write the whole story. Thanks again!