Review Detail of KhadaFourJhin in DC: The Male Amazon

Was going to give a 2/5 solely based on the first 10 chapters but after that, it only went up which made me really happy. The premise was really good but the execution was done poorly at the beginning. I suggest you rewrite the first 10 chapters as they lacked logic and common sense with some pretty disgusting plot holes. Not hating as I enjoy the story the more it goes but if you fixed those beginning chapters then you'd receive a lot more readers that don't drop it before it gets good. Everything is good except the dialogue, it is either really really cringe or decent. That is my only criticism in future chapters. Apart from that good job author!