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I knew the novel wasn't going to take itself seriously within the first few chapters, but it was interesting enough to read. Story with a lot of potential but ends up being bland. strongest system constantly gets nerfed. You get full arcs focusing on the specific training of different classes, only to use them for half of the next arc to be never touched again. Important chapters are well written, but 80% of such arcs are muddled at best. It's just the author filling up the chapters, and you end up skimming without meaning to. Fights go from being well written describing the MCs mix of martial arts and spells to just MC and his harem+summons showered bad guys with all the names of spells, dungeons end up being conquered in what's really a paragraph while the 10 chapters it took is MC flirting amd the harem pinching him or punching him. The ranking system gets explained every so often, but MC jumps the equivalent of 4 ranks from the very start of the novel, and soon enough, his commanders do the same. Fights turn into jokes with bad banter. God's ignore the world's setting, you have then breaking all sorts of rules, and then you have the gods that support mc with the constant "don't give him special treatment" doing just that. The world and system were promising, but the writing fell short.

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Not to mention that at some point, the harem makes the story unreadable. you get maybe 5 paragraphs of story in between the 22 you get of the harem flirting, the peanut gallery of boys cursing mc for his luck, the ladies throwing themselves at him, the MCs entourage talking about the situation and the acquaintance shaking their heads at the groups antics. Even if interactions between characters is important to flesh out the story, at some point, it's necessary to cut the useless chatter, instead we get 3 chapters that could've been 1 and all that happened in that time was the mc leaving his room, say goodbye to the harem and use the teleportation gate.