First, I'd like to start with the synopsis; it is written well and eye-catching. I don't read many novels that have to do with systems, but I had to give this one a try. From the first few chapters that I read, I can see that you're doing very well, but it would be better to elaborate more and give your characters more in-depth emotions. Despite that, I know that this book will do well because it has a fascinating plot. I wish the author all the best!
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