Author, please read. I wrote a review, but accidentally deleted it. I don't want to rewrite the thing, it took me a bit of time, but please refer to my comment in chapter 3. I really feel like some of the suggestions I left could improve this story. (I posted the comment before adding the review. The comment is virtually the same as that unfortunately deceased review. Gboard is stupid and only lets you copy and paste once, and you can't select comment text, as it is an image, and a hyperlink.)
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