Review Detail of Achyut_Jha in My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

The book and the plot had so much potential, but poor story progression and the build-up of Romantic relationships and his harem pretty much ruined the book for me. I tried to keep up somehow by reaching 430 chapters, but then I just could not because the story didn't make the cut. I hope the author improves and makes sure an interesting plot line does not ruin.