Review Detail of DrMonotone in My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death
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At the start, the story is somewhat hot garbage in my opinion. Most of the characters were insufferable, including the MC who was borderline mentally ill. There was a ton of redundancy and other annoying aspects, but after around 50 chapters the story picked up. Then after 100 chapters it finally got my attention- I feel like the author either got more comfortable writing the story or simply understood how to develop the characters better. If you feel like giving this story a chance, at least persevere through the first 100 chapters. They aren't too long and I got through them in a hand full of hours so its not much of a waste if you still don't like the story at that point.
My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death
PancakesWitch
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The thing that attracted me to this novel in the first place was the idea of world traveling through apps, which you did splendidly. Some of the other things I liked were how Frank did not become OP immediately, and that he learned from his mistakes. Despite having the system, there were still limits to his growth- unlike other similar novels where the MC basically becomes a god within the first 50 chapters. As for learning from his mistakes, although it was a small thing, the fact that he remembered to do his homework made me laugh pretty hard. Many other novels have that issue where they make the MC being stupid an annoying trend, even when he gains intelligence through the system he stays stupid. Frank doesn't seem to be this type thankfully. Overall the novel is turning into a real gem, so keep up the good work!
PancakesWitch:Thanks, could you point out what you liked? I started writing this without much thought put into it but im glad it improved