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bermudaassasine
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Chapt:88. What do I say it's a decent/good read even if I would've liked more focus on the other characters like hell Jake could be a decent bluff, due to his lying and thieving at a young age and always winning at card games. Speaking about characters in my personal opinion there's character bloat that makes me forget who is who and makes me less invested overall. Despite all of that the character interactions feel good and organic? Give more boss and Jen scenes/lore. Btw small suggestion change the generic title or over and photoshop a cool dude with guns, or just make an art commision. .

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The apocalypse of another world

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bermudaassasine
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one last thing the whole setting gave me Cdda dark days ahead vibes, as they were in turn inspired by other works.

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Thank you for your honest review. As the story draws on, I plan to reveal more about each of the main cast and side characters in-depth. I have planned segments for certain characters at certain times, so eventually, every character will get more light shined upon them. This includes Boss and Jen. As for the book cover, I am currently looking into it. As I want something that draws in the reader from the cover alone.