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Review Detail of ohcasket in The apocalypse of another world

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This webnovel is quite good but the romance between the Mc and The female lead kinda ruined it for me. The romance between the two definitely feels natural and not rushed in any type of way but the dialogue between the two is just so cringe. Everytime there’s a conflict with Don the female lead has to remind him that she loves him a lot etc etc. At first I didn’t mind this but it happens almost every single chapter . It’s just feels so dramatic and cringey to me . I do suggest you read this Webnovel if you don’t mind that small problem tho.

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The apocalypse of another world

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Princex4164
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Please stop writing in future tense man, it annoying, you keep saying the "mc would do something" it should be he did something it just kinda ruins the story.....

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Thank you for the honest review. I really appreciate it!

newthings
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so will you reduce the cringe?

R_V_R:Thank you for the honest review. I really appreciate it!
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Depending on where you are at in the novel. It has been, but yes, it is limited to a degree.

newthings:so will you reduce the cringe?