Review Detail of mirxkewl in The Dragon's Kiss

Based on just the first few chapters, I'm impressed by the quality of this novel. The grammar is close to flawless and the characters are extremely engaging. I'm fond of the way the main character interacts with the brother-figure in her life and how their siblingly relationship is depicted so light-heartedly, considering the overall concept. The opening scene is captivating as well and draws the audience right in. I like that I can get a sense of the character's personality and ideology based on her interactions as shown in the first chapter and am definitely excited to see more of her in the future. For a Fantasy Romance, this has a lot of potential! Thank you for writing this :D