I've read a few chapters and needless to say... it was epic. The story premise about someone mastering all job classes is something I can relate to because I tend to grind all characters when I play MMORPG's as well. I really like how you managed to come up with an opening that explained how someone could beat a grandmaster in all job classes. There are some grammatical errors and punctuation misuse that I've noticed. Some used a comma instead of a period, and some separations should have been done with a semi-colon or a dot but you used a comma instead. Of course, that's understandable because as you said, you're not that well-versed in the English language. I suggest using Grammarly for now, and then work your way from there. I see that you're really passionate in writing as you have written a lot of books on this platform and I know you will improve greatly with the right criticisms. I've been writing for nine years now and I know what you meant when you said it's hard for trolling and bashing to get to your mind. Even I, who has written for the past nine years, still haven't gotten used to the trolling and bashing from time to time. (I saw your review on this movel) That's why just know that you have our back :) We are all authors on the same page/platform so if you need anything, don't hesitate to drop by in webnovel discord servers for help. We all deal with the same problems and I hope we can at least alleviate each other's hardships. Have a great day and I hope you're always getting enough rest :)
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