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OEmilio
OEmilioLv102yrOEmilio

This novel is insane. Honestly from the moment I picked it up I was genuinely hooked. I mean what a way to use Pathos in order grab the readers initial attention. It captures your heart and refuses to let go. The story is well thought out and it’s pacing is quite lovely. With the natural flow of its writing structure one can’t help but fall in love with the characters. Some ideas and concepts in this book I wish I had come up with! The ideas are genius and it makes me mad I didn’t think of them first. My only critique would be that the author needs to tighten the grammar just a bit but other than that, phenomenal job. I will keep waiting for more updates!! I can’t wait to continue your story!

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Grandmaster Of All Job Class

Mel_Aniv

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OEmilio
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Stellar job !! And dont be too hard on yourself. You are doing great. Grammer can be tricky

Mel_Aniv:Thanks! Glad you liked it! 😍 That ideas were way back from 2019 since I was just starting so I just did a remake of my first novel. Maybe I am just only creative and imaginative 😭 sad that my grammar was bad and tenses tend to mix. 😭 Hope to learn more in the future!
Mel_Aniv
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Thanks! Glad you liked it! 😍 That ideas were way back from 2019 since I was just starting so I just did a remake of my first novel. Maybe I am just only creative and imaginative 😭 sad that my grammar was bad and tenses tend to mix. 😭 Hope to learn more in the future!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thanks! That eased my worried mind a bit. Thanks for the review! I am well pleased!

OEmilio:Stellar job !! And dont be too hard on yourself. You are doing great. Grammer can be tricky