Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Grandmaster Of All Job Class

It's pretty okay in terms of the chapters available so far. With a very straightforward premise this may be familiar for many readers. Transmigration, main character dying and moving to a new body. However the world building here is great enough to stand out on its own, and the main character Joan is different enough from most. While I'm grateful that he isn't another "average" (like, saying he's average) protagonist, I would like to see more of his character, like what makes him unique. So far there's a glimpse of his character, an outline but not outstanding yet at least. The only real thing that does need some revisions would be some parts should be told instead of shown, the first ten chapters felt like a breeze for me to read, not because of speed reading but many parts were told. Kinda wish they were shown but oh well, there's gonna be more chapters, and I believe the author is giving their best to provide a memorable reading experience.