Review Detail of Roxanne_Woods in Grandmaster Of All Job Class

The world of this story is truly interesting and well built. Although there are only six chapter right now, there are written in such a way that the readers find themselves curious about the worldss and the demons. The only flaws are that present and past tenses are sometimes mixed. Best to stick to one tense to avoid mistakes like that. Especially as it can be a bit challenging as you write one action in present tense and the next in past tense, but still in the same sentence. Also, don't hesitate to speak about the MC's motivation to make him feel more real. Apart from that, it's a good story and it's easy to see that you already know where you are going with it. Keep up with the good work, author! 😊