I'll start off by saying that if you have read any of Pancakes' other novels you'll know what to expect from this novel. I'm not the best at writing reviews, but I'll try my best (going all out for my favorite author on this site). CURRENT READING STATUS: Chapter 40 Writing Quality: Pancakes has great writing quality, grammatical errors are extremely rare. The most obvious errors is when Pancakes mistakes character names for characters from their other novels. This isnt a big deal, however it might bother some readers. Stability of Updates: All that I can say is that Pancakes has a fantastic update schedule and all of their novels are updated regularly and all of these updates leave you wishing it was a mass release! Pancakes announces all release for their novels on their discord, so be sure to join if you want to be the first to read the new chapters. (Shameless fan promotion!) Story Development: If you have read EoC or DQR then you know that Pancakes has created and hinted at their novels being part of a larger universe, more on this in the world background section. Progression wise, the story moves at what I find a good pace. There is action which drives power progression and everything in-between for character development. Character Design: I really enjoy the characters introduced throughout the novel so far. Noah the protagonist experienced the cruelty of being weak in a power based society, and didnt let his experiences consume him. While he yearns for greater strength, he isn't a brainless cultivation novel young master that challenges everyone for the slightest transgression against him. He builds connections with those he surrounds himself with, while it may be due to his abilities, I believe it to be part of his character. The supporting characters close to our MC aren't monotonous and boring and all have their own quirks and back story that make them unique. World Building/Background: I really enjoy novels with dungeons appearing during modern times. I get some Solo Leveling vibes with variation that doesn't make this type of world setting dull. This can be seen in how hunter progress, and aren't locked or stuck in their ranks like other dungeon novels. The system functions in the novel aren't ridiculously blown out of portion, each aspect makes sense for the world, and our MC. The system in this novel is quite similar to the systems in Pancakes' other novels. Besides this Pancakes layers in bread crumbs that connect with all of their other novels, and all of these aspects leave the reader curious as to how Pancakes is going to trickle in elements from their other novels. All mythical elements that Pancakes incorporates all extremely well researched (when applicable) and fall into place perfectly. In conclusion I really enjoy reading any of Pancakes' novels and this novel is no exception. There are consistent updates, all of which are of high quality. Give the novel a shot and see what happens. Hope that you enjoy it as much as I have so far.

I shall partake into a self-review of my own work. Although it is only a few chapters as I am writing it, I can guarantee all readers that expect an evil mc to be given what you expect. Noah was born in a world that had already undergone an apocalypse, monsters appeared everywhere through gates in space, and even normal animals, plants, and even humans mutated into Mutated Beasts, the world was truly in chaos. However, the story takes place in a semingly calm society, where Hunters have managed to pave their way through this endless chaos, however, the threat of gates persists, and even children are trained to become hunters at young age. Noah is a powerless man, he was never given any power through his entire life, and is bullied by all the powerful awakened at his side, however, one day, by ceertain circumstances, he changes his fate completely! Filled with a burning desire for revenge and a wicked mind, he will mercilessly get through any challenge or any enemy that gets through his path for greatness. Noah only aims for one thing, to be at the pinnacle of the world!

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how people are singing high praises for it i dont know but here we go. the writing is ok, but there is quite glaring gramma issues fairly often. however i can cut the poor grammar some slack due to 2 chapters everyday together with the 3 other stories the author is maintaining, how you do it i dont know, but kudos to ya. story devlopment is decent. id consider it a tried and tested setting at this point, and does nothing radically new. im a bit curious how the author will continue, because this type of story has a tendency to become samey and dull after a few 100 chapters. ill be real i dont really like the characters that much, some of them havnt had that much time to devlop so ill give it a pass. but the mc and fl feels a bit too much like bad teen drama couple. while there is text about them, it dosnt feel substantial. i think the maid and rich boys thing is pretty cute though. and i have no real opinion of the stoic guy the world is there i suppose, its a paper cutout world at the moment, but like any world especially apocalypse world have to potential to be interesting. (someone did something stupid that caused the space cracks? potential legendary loot at old landmarks or capitals) you get the idea tl;dr not groundbreaking, but interesting enough to pass the time, updates often, so you dont forget what you where reading after 2 weeks of no posts goodluck -88

clicked this by accident. ended up binge reading 200 chapters without sleep. surprisingly fun read. insane, bloodthirsty mc, with a wife that matches.

I have only read 69 (nice) chapters at the moment and I will try my best not to spoil anything but the mc is pretty evil or I should say only looks out for himself and those around him and he gets strong really fast and overall I would say one of my favorite books I have read so far. I will admit I'm pretty biased because I love evil mc

Real Score: 3.9/5 (12/28/21 See you in 2022 Webnovel, Also FIX YOUR SCORING SYSTEM ALREADY!) Title: Just stick with it, cuz it has some cool concepts later on. I'm going to say this now, but you probably won't like the story right away and normally I advocate just skipping something if it doesn't catch your attention all the way. I'd rather eat an average, plain-old five course meal to its end, than a five course meal that only has one or two good servings. But, an analogys aside if you get through the boring, borderline edgelord emo- goth Pandering fist chapters main character you will be rewarded with: Robot Girls. I am dead serious that was the only reason I slogged through this horrible beginning of a story for the very personal interest in robot girls. Yea, its selfish. So What! I slogged through the opening, I write the reviews. So, I get to make the rules. NO COMPLAINING! For the rest of the story it does get better later on, but again I've never advocated a story for that reason. Even if fans don't come back to that story arc, to re-read it. They should be interesting to read and explore on the first read- through. If you want some cool vampire powers the protagonist does some pretty cool stuff with blood powers later on. And it's got some pretty cool high- concept stuff that you can take away from. But Pancakewitch has done better story's at this point in time and they're more worth your time and attention. But if you just want a somewhat competent Power fantasy, then this works.

this story is over-all, one of my best reads and I would implore anyone to keep reading it even though just now it got converted to paid version. but still, except update speed, everything is exceptional.

Great novel. As expected from PancakeWitch. Just a little bit more background on that world would be good. In other words: ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I absolutely adore this novel 98/100.