Review Detail of 8Eight in Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse

how people are singing high praises for it i dont know but here we go. the writing is ok, but there is quite glaring gramma issues fairly often. however i can cut the poor grammar some slack due to 2 chapters everyday together with the 3 other stories the author is maintaining, how you do it i dont know, but kudos to ya. story devlopment is decent. id consider it a tried and tested setting at this point, and does nothing radically new. im a bit curious how the author will continue, because this type of story has a tendency to become samey and dull after a few 100 chapters. ill be real i dont really like the characters that much, some of them havnt had that much time to devlop so ill give it a pass. but the mc and fl feels a bit too much like bad teen drama couple. while there is text about them, it dosnt feel substantial. i think the maid and rich boys thing is pretty cute though. and i have no real opinion of the stoic guy the world is there i suppose, its a paper cutout world at the moment, but like any world especially apocalypse world have to potential to be interesting. (someone did something stupid that caused the space cracks? potential legendary loot at old landmarks or capitals) you get the idea tl;dr not groundbreaking, but interesting enough to pass the time, updates often, so you dont forget what you where reading after 2 weeks of no posts goodluck -88