Review Detail of ottopayback in Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse
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I'll start off by saying that if you have read any of Pancakes' other novels you'll know what to expect from this novel. I'm not the best at writing reviews, but I'll try my best (going all out for my favorite author on this site). CURRENT READING STATUS: Chapter 40 Writing Quality: Pancakes has great writing quality, grammatical errors are extremely rare. The most obvious errors is when Pancakes mistakes character names for characters from their other novels. This isnt a big deal, however it might bother some readers. Stability of Updates: All that I can say is that Pancakes has a fantastic update schedule and all of their novels are updated regularly and all of these updates leave you wishing it was a mass release! Pancakes announces all release for their novels on their discord, so be sure to join if you want to be the first to read the new chapters. (Shameless fan promotion!) Story Development: If you have read EoC or DQR then you know that Pancakes has created and hinted at their novels being part of a larger universe, more on this in the world background section. Progression wise, the story moves at what I find a good pace. There is action which drives power progression and everything in-between for character development. Character Design: I really enjoy the characters introduced throughout the novel so far. Noah the protagonist experienced the cruelty of being weak in a power based society, and didnt let his experiences consume him. While he yearns for greater strength, he isn't a brainless cultivation novel young master that challenges everyone for the slightest transgression against him. He builds connections with those he surrounds himself with, while it may be due to his abilities, I believe it to be part of his character. The supporting characters close to our MC aren't monotonous and boring and all have their own quirks and back story that make them unique. World Building/Background: I really enjoy novels with dungeons appearing during modern times. I get some Solo Leveling vibes with variation that doesn't make this type of world setting dull. This can be seen in how hunter progress, and aren't locked or stuck in their ranks like other dungeon novels. The system functions in the novel aren't ridiculously blown out of portion, each aspect makes sense for the world, and our MC. The system in this novel is quite similar to the systems in Pancakes' other novels. Besides this Pancakes layers in bread crumbs that connect with all of their other novels, and all of these aspects leave the reader curious as to how Pancakes is going to trickle in elements from their other novels. All mythical elements that Pancakes incorporates all extremely well researched (when applicable) and fall into place perfectly. In conclusion I really enjoy reading any of Pancakes' novels and this novel is no exception. There are consistent updates, all of which are of high quality. Give the novel a shot and see what happens. Hope that you enjoy it as much as I have so far.
Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse
PancakesWitch
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i wont ponder on your stupid advice and write whatever i want, go write your ideal novels yourself lmao. If I am not having fun writing in my own way, what's even the point of it? And I dont give a damn if anybody reads them either, writing is what makes my life fun, why should i change my ways for some dummies like you? I dont give a single damn~~
Candy_Man_8584:Yo, pan u still focus too much on details instead of the story. Your story is good for people who don't have any other works except reading novels all day , but most of the people who have tons n tons of work in their daily life , ur story progression is too slow, maximum ppl will leave after watching 200 to 300 chapters of a particular novel whose progress speed is slow as snail....... pls ponder on my words
He reads the other chapters in my discord, they are up to 70! Although you cannot become beta reader now that I am publishing them on webnovel, so you have to wait
newthings: "Fantasy 31 Chapters 47.5K Views" 40 huh?
It's a great book so far, but honestly wondering if this is a fake review. In the first 40 chapters I've seen numerous grammatical mistakes. That was one of the things that caught my attention reading this review and it was 100% not true. Could very well ruin chances of others reading the book if they also feel like review was faked.
Not in the first 40, but figured I'd give an example, though this one is very small it is where I am currently at. "Master… Did you had breakfast?" asked Jon, his clothes made him look like a young little evil prince, wearing shorts that showed his slender white legs, and a cute black sweater." That's not a correct sentence. Did you HAVE breakfast.
I stated at the beginning of the review that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, so ill be the first to admit that there is some inherent bias in my review for their novel. compared to other novels, yes there are some with better grammar, and many with worse grammar. The review is my opinion it was never intended to sound fake, just wanted to support my favorite author.
Lott1217:It's a great book so far, but honestly wondering if this is a fake review. In the first 40 chapters I've seen numerous grammatical mistakes. That was one of the things that caught my attention reading this review and it was 100% not true. Could very well ruin chances of others reading the book if they also feel like review was faked.
I'm not trying to be rude about this at all, but even I have favorite authors and all but errors are still very noticeable. I read many many books that leave you confused trying to figure out what is meant before you can keep reading. Thankfully this is a bit better, but seeing that as the first thing in your review gave me huge hopes. It's literally like every 2 of 3 paragraphs though that there are errors with wording that stop me and make me think, well that's not right.? Plus you saying you're not good at giving reviews to then turn around and have a very good one kinda made me think you were the author on another account or something to give the book a boost.
ottopayback:I stated at the beginning of the review that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, so ill be the first to admit that there is some inherent bias in my review for their novel. compared to other novels, yes there are some with better grammar, and many with worse grammar. The review is my opinion it was never intended to sound fake, just wanted to support my favorite author.
I understand, truthfully this review took me about 2 hours to write and search for the words that I wanted use. Also im sorry if my words were misleading in anyway, and as I said before, just trying to support my favorite author.
Lott1217:I'm not trying to be rude about this at all, but even I have favorite authors and all but errors are still very noticeable. I read many many books that leave you confused trying to figure out what is meant before you can keep reading. Thankfully this is a bit better, but seeing that as the first thing in your review gave me huge hopes. It's literally like every 2 of 3 paragraphs though that there are errors with wording that stop me and make me think, well that's not right.? Plus you saying you're not good at giving reviews to then turn around and have a very good one kinda made me think you were the author on another account or something to give the book a boost.
otto is a privilege reader of my other book Epic of Caterpillar. Also my grammar is terrible, if youre too dramatic over it I wholeheartedly recomend you to never read any of my books ever. Also, stop annoying otto for this, he simply enjoyed the novel, many people don't mind these small grammar errors and this is why I am earning a lot of money off my novels, so stop being so annoying please
Lott1217:I'm not trying to be rude about this at all, but even I have favorite authors and all but errors are still very noticeable. I read many many books that leave you confused trying to figure out what is meant before you can keep reading. Thankfully this is a bit better, but seeing that as the first thing in your review gave me huge hopes. It's literally like every 2 of 3 paragraphs though that there are errors with wording that stop me and make me think, well that's not right.? Plus you saying you're not good at giving reviews to then turn around and have a very good one kinda made me think you were the author on another account or something to give the book a boost.
It's good enough that most people probably just overlook it. And as I said, I wasn't trying to be rude about it. I was simply pointing out that you shouldn't say something in a book review that's not true. Especially when it's something many people will find a big deal. Not sure why you're being so rude and defensive when I directly said I'm not trying to be rude.
PancakesWitch:otto is a privilege reader of my other book Epic of Caterpillar. Also my grammar is terrible, if youre too dramatic over it I wholeheartedly recomend you to never read any of my books ever. Also, stop annoying otto for this, he simply enjoyed the novel, many people don't mind these small grammar errors and this is why I am earning a lot of money off my novels, so stop being so annoying please
90% of the review is accurate, and grammar erros cna be considered rare when you read literally anything else that is not top 20 here
Lott1217:It's good enough that most people probably just overlook it. And as I said, I wasn't trying to be rude about it. I was simply pointing out that you shouldn't say something in a book review that's not true. Especially when it's something many people will find a big deal. Not sure why you're being so rude and defensive when I directly said I'm not trying to be rude.
I have read other novels of PancakesWitch and this is going to be the sixth novel of her that I'm going to read and looking forward for it. I love her work, especially how all the novels of her are all connected with each other. I don't know how she keeps up with the updates of every novel but I can still say she never fails unlike some who work on single novels. She's so freaking awesome. Please continue with your amazing work👍🏻👍🏻.
Lott1217:Not in the first 40, but figured I'd give an example, though this one is very small it is where I am currently at. "Master… Did you had breakfast?" asked Jon, his clothes made him look like a young little evil prince, wearing shorts that showed his slender white legs, and a cute black sweater." That's not a correct sentence. Did you HAVE breakfast.
I definitely did not recognise the error if you hadn't point out the mistake lol guess I'm weak at grammar
Lott1217:Not in the first 40, but figured I'd give an example, though this one is very small it is where I am currently at. "Master… Did you had breakfast?" asked Jon, his clothes made him look like a young little evil prince, wearing shorts that showed his slender white legs, and a cute black sweater." That's not a correct sentence. Did you HAVE breakfast.
Yo, pan u still focus too much on details instead of the story. Your story is good for people who don't have any other works except reading novels all day , but most of the people who have tons n tons of work in their daily life , ur story progression is too slow, maximum ppl will leave after watching 200 to 300 chapters of a particular novel whose progress speed is slow as snail....... pls ponder on my words
PancakesWitch:He reads the other chapters in my discord, they are up to 70! Although you cannot become beta reader now that I am publishing them on webnovel, so you have to wait
PancakesWitch:90% of the review is accurate, and grammar erros cna be considered rare when you read literally anything else that is not top 20 here