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Review Detail of DaoistihMpYS in The Vampire Empress: Blood Queen & Her Kings

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a satisfyjbg story ending with slightly lacking amount of smut. Good God! with 4 hot men and one woman, the group petting was really lacking and amounted to groups of 2. various partners were removed from various scenes without explaination of their locations. I loved the plot twists and generally with better editing and a solid rewrite or two filling in gaps and answering questions missed?- like what happened to servants at cold palace? Did the food and treatment get better? why didnt the bed imptove and why did she remain there without her mates giving it a big upgrade? were they growing food to survive? when the 2 servants went to support her business who maintained the 5 plazas pf the cold palacd? Why didnt the dowager address or improve her living conditions if they are collaborating on creating a new demon realm? Why was Silver the last to get intimate if he was waiting 500 years? what happened to the storylinevof Silver being the god of war she married after losing her 3 mates and no one found out? even after they ascended? The use to the mate bond was generalized and she was able to block their thoughts even during final bonding? How did they miss her creatoon? what where the 3 princes' tribulations? Children? Great outline but lots of work to fill in areas where the author dropped or ignored prior themes, arcs or story lines

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