webnovel
King_Tyler
King_TylerLv123yr
2021-10-17 02:58

Its to confusing, the mc is also to Inconsistent and spinless All the ofher characters are annoying and hard to Remember cuz they were set up poorly

Earthling Soul

Suroj_Sapayev
4.6
111 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies1
Suroj_Sapayev
Suroj_SapayevAuthor

appreciated very much. it is the best review I got so far. I have things to work on

3yr
1
Other Reviews
Suroj_Sapayev
Suroj_SapayevAuthor

I, the author, proudly present you my story. Check it out and I promise you won't regret it 😁 do not forget to leave a review/comments/and vote

3yr

Deborah_Pruijmboom
Deborah_PruijmboomLv2

This author surely has a lot of creativity going on. These ventures and characters are so well thought out and the plot blows my mind. I have just started to read this book and I am now at chapter 5 of 50. I can not wait to read the rest. The world background is litterly OUT OF THIS world! I don't think I'll sleep much toninght as I just neeeed to know what happens next. Thank you author for this great read!

3yr
Lancee
LanceeLv1

Creative writing skill from the Author. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably with a dash of quality view from each word written. A story worth a vote

3yr
fruitral_6214
fruitral_6214Lv1

$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 or contact kerawood.review@gmail.com

3yr
UnableToBe
UnableToBeLv10

Many unique ideas. Aliens are rare in Webnovel. The promised prince theme is not original but at least mc had to win the position. and the world building is impressive. Characters need more screen time, but by after chapter 70 it happens. Thank you😂 Other than that great job.

3yr
Tomorrowceases
TomorrowceasesLv1

What impresses me is the writing quality, while sometimes there are things I'd have personally written differently, it generally flows in a beautiful manner. You read without really forcing you to do so. It flows and mesmerize the reader. Nothing to say in regards to the stability of updates. I've read up to the 5th chapter so far, the story isn't boring or anything, you keep discovering things without getting bored at all. The story development is good. I wouldn't have much to say about the character design, it's correct. As for the world background, I'm looking forward to discover and understand more. Seems interesting to me. Deep and interesting. Keep up the good work, author.

3yr
vishal_singh_0552
vishal_singh_0552Lv3

Each and every chapter in this book are written in a neat way. While the story grows with a interesting plots and twists which will capture your attention to it. A very addective novel. Overall it is full package of nice plots and a very good written work. Keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Skilgannon_Gemmel
Skilgannon_GemmelLv1

The author has a story that while it takes a few chapters to feel more concrete and stable has very creative ideas, and is able to describe actions well to help you feel the movement within the story. There is some bloat early on though, and if you push through that the writing does improve. Keep up the good work!

3yr
Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv10

This started like an abduction survival horror story that then transitioned into a superpower alien-space-fiction chosen prince story. It's one heck of a road trip that devolved into mortal combat. I enjoyed the road trip more than the fighting tournament. There were some great concepts in there. I like how you get a sense of the characters immediately, and the conflict is set up clearly. The formatting and grammar could use some work though. Keep on writing, author!

3yr
Shamira_Farhath
Shamira_FarhathLv3

Wow! The way you described each and every character and places are absolutely mind blowing. The world background and character design is very good. Keep up your good work.

3yr
Related Stories

Lord of Mysteries

With the rising tide of steam power and machinery, who can come close to being a Beyonder? Shrouded in the fog of history and darkness, who or what is the lurking evil that murmurs into our ears? Waking up to be faced with a string of mysteries, Zhou Mingrui finds himself reincarnated as Klein Moretti in an alternate Victorian era world where he sees a world filled with machinery, cannons, dreadnoughts, airships, difference machines, as well as Potions, Divination, Hexes, Tarot Cards, Sealed Artifacts… The Light continues to shine but mystery has never gone far. Follow Klein as he finds himself entangled with the Churches of the world—both orthodox and unorthodox—while he slowly develops newfound powers thanks to the Beyonder potions. Like the corresponding tarot card, The Fool, which is numbered 0—a number of unlimited potential—this is the legend of "The Fool."

Cuttlefish That Loves Diving · Fantasy
4.8
1409 Chs

My Elf System

Orion was on his way back home from work. He was hurrying back home to take a nap while planning how he would spend his weekend as well, but while he was lost in thought, a truck suddenly appeared out of nowhere and the last thing he remembered was the truck barreling towards him before everything around him turned dark. However to his surprise, he didn’t feel any pain after having the accident. In fact, he couldn’t see anything. Everything around him seemed dark but when he opened his mouth to speak, he heard the gurgling sounds of a baby. Noticing that the one sounding like a baby was him, Orion tried to open his eyes to know exactly where he was, but when he did, the first thing his eyes fell upon was a stunning beautiful elf, holding him with the most tenderest of care. Not only was she his mother, she was also a queen as well and she had a beautiful sister who adored him just as much as his mother. Aside from this, Orion also noticed he had received a system which allowed him to grow and evolve faster than a normal High Elf but after finding out the huge role his mother played in eradicating the war between all races, Orion vowed to live a happy and fulfilling life with his mother, aunt and a few others he cared a lot about.

PhoenixAsh · Fantasy
4.3
228 Chs

Supreme Magus

Derek McCoy was a man who spent his entire life facing adversity and injustice. After being forced to settle with surviving rather than living, he had finally found his place in the world, until everything was taken from him one last time. After losing his life to avenge his murdered brother, he reincarnates until he finds a world worth living in, a world filled with magic and monsters. Follow him along his journey, from grieving brother to alien soldier. From infant to Supreme Magus. ------------------------------------------- Tags: Transmigration, Male MC, Western Fantasy Schedule: 12 chapters/week (unless I'm ill or stuff happens) Chapter Lenght: 1200 - 1400 words Warning: The MC is not a hero nor an anti-hero. He is a broken, cynic and misanthropic person looking only for his own gain. If you are looking for a forgiving, nice, MC that goes around saving people in distress, this is not your cup of tea. Same if you want an unchanging MC with no character development. ------------------------------------------- Discord Server: https://discord.gg/suprememagus ---------------------------------------- Cover of Tiamat form Lith Verhen by josh groban aka manohar aka Animustw. My new Pfp was made by Josh (same as above). Visit the official discord for his official portraits of the characters.

Legion20 · Fantasy
4.8
3491 Chs

Chaos' Heir

A recurring nightmare afflicted Khan's nights since the Second Impact. His dreams replayed the scenes of the crash of the Nak's spaceship, an alien race that the humans had defeated five hundred years ago. Khan's life had turned upside-down after the tragedy. His mother had died during the incident, and the Nak's toxic mana had infected him. His father had managed to save him, but they ended up losing their home and name in the process. The nightmares wouldn't let Khan forget about the Nak, so he decided to join the Global Army and learn to wield mana. He had to put an end to those dreams, even if that meant hunting down that alien race through the stars. ------------------------------------- Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Instagram: eocnovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/fNsPwXMP7P Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/

Eveofchaos · Fantasy
4.7
973 Chs

Struggling as a Villain

Dying after getting bitten by a zombie, the main character finds himself in the world of fantasy. Reincarnating as the mid-rank villain, he decided to live differently and avoid the main cast. After all who would like to live as an arrogant brat only to die like a dog? However, just as he resolved to live a better life, [Ding!] [This world is not the same as the host knows. Because of the tragic ends, the God of Fortune has reversed the time and has allowed the main heroines to retain their memories.] Yeah, he is done for. ****** Additional tags: Possessive characters, no Yaoi, no Yuri, no ntr. ***** A/N:- The main character would be overpowered but not to the point where he could defeat his enemies with a snap of his fingers. This novel would be more focused on character development, slice of life, and romance.

RashCore · Fantasy
4.1
249 Chs
Login