Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in Monarch of Darkness, Arsene

Loving it so far, the main character is hilariously dark. Not a lot of world building in the firat two chapters, but what is there is structurally sounds and pulls the story along. There are some grammar/writing errors. It’s not enough to distract from the story and is easily fixed with a quick edit later. I’m waiting for him to pick back up his canabalistic ways.