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2021-04-07 11:06

I like it! The synopsis is interesting and it really made me want to read it. The first chapter shows what is happening or what the story entails. I'm still annoyed at the guy who fudging killed him. Great story though! I can't see any grammatical errors. It's smooth to read and it's fun to read too! Great job author!

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