Pros: The quality of the writing is superb. Characters are relatively well thought out and have personality World is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up. Cons: Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together. The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short. But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay. I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.
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