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GuzaSan
GuzaSanLv33yr
2021-06-26 19:01

Dropped after around 30 chapters. It's just like, everything about this is so generic, every single character just has a template personality. literally Sadistic fighter, Tough cop, Grumpy teenager, and cute little sister. He can't kill anyone if it's not for money cause then he won't be the ideal assassin his little sister wanted him to be which is just beyond me. It's so stupid and he's not even an assassin anymore as in he's not a pro, he has no 'customers' and it honestly feels like something that's purely meant to increase the word count. MC hardly bothers hiding his abilities, numerous people already know his identity and capabilities and even his gym trainer knows something is weird with him. The cultivation system is nonexistent, there is mana, inner energy, and spells. For some unknown reason, he feels that he should learn how to harness that inner energy although it's apparently less pure than the mana he already uses. TL: DR - Cringe lines, non-existent combat system. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone interested in anything beyond a children's show level of plot.

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YoungMasterMeng
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he look like not an assassin at all. nosy,talkative and showoff

Abyss_Alliance
Abyss_AllianceLv1

this novel has moore than 30 ch

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Valixiant
ValixiantLv2

Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together. First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist) Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.

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