Review Detail of J_Writing in My quiet life

Well. I wrote my first review and Webnovel decided not to take it. Rude website. Anywho. Let me start, or restart, by saying that I am head over heels for this story. The way you write allows your reader to paint the portrait with guidelines and I greatly enjoy that. You pull the reader in with the sweet tender beginning and then sweep them for a wild and emotional ride. As a mother, I can say with certainty that I would never allow my child to go through such horrors; I literally cried for the MC and grew enraged at every member of her family. Goldie excluding of course. I felt every wound and wanted nothing more than to comfort that sweet child. If I could, I would put myself into the story just so I could give her all the love and care she deserves. As well, you bring a light to disabilities that I don't think many people understand, and for that I bow to you. For critiques, I can only say that I recommend to take each chapter individually and make adjusts where needed on repeat of words, run on sentences, grammar and punctuation. Most of the time I can't read a story when that is bad so I want to assure you there isn't that much here because I devoured all of these chapters. Her relationship with Jade is adorable by the way. As a sage heckin wisdoms, I guess, I can say that the more you write in a public setting the more you will become accustom to doing those edits after you write each chapter. I too get sucked up in the flow of my writing and have to remember to go back and edit; which does get hard because you read it so much. Please take a moment to congratulate yourself on a story well written. I am looking forward to more.