Item: The Coldest CEO was my first love
Rating: 3.8
Author: novelline00

novelline00Lv1411mth

2024-01-03 15:33

The story is good but needs a lot of proofreading and editing. There are so many grammatical errors and misused pronouns. A he becomes a she, a husband becomes a wife, sister becomes a brother and vice versa. It make the story confusing and messy. I cannot fully appreciate the story because of this.

The Coldest CEO was my first love

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