The Seven Pandora’S Kings Book Review By NakedApron - WebNovel

NakedApronLv33yr

2021-04-04 18:35

I feel like I need to read more of the story to leave a better review, but here it is regardless. Quality: I'm guessing author tried writing this in present tense at first, so there's gonna be a few of those you'll be seeing around. Nothing a few rereads can't fix. World bldng: Nothing to nitpick here yet. The setting is Earth and then suddenly superpowers appear. Character design: I think this will be the focal point of the story. It's gonna introduce seven characters with seven different motives and maybe they'll clash between each other if their motives happen to be incompatible. During all this, everyone's gonna experience character development, and it's all gonna be epic fun. The only worry I have is the MC's motive. Which doesn't exist. Yet. As told by the system and himself. I could be proven wrong very soon, as I haven't read too much, but yeah. Most of the time, finding meaning in one's life isn't a very compelling motive, as it doesn't really show a clear path to the readers. And I saw a few novels which almost border on whining, so I hope this one doesn't go down that path. Summary: aside from that one flaw, this one deserves a 5 star. Besides, even if MC turns out to be a lost cause, Cole seems extremely interesting, so we can be excited for that

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AstralGodZeroAuthor

Thanks for the review. I’m reworking the beginning of the story to fix misunderstandings or simply bad choices i made previously. I’ve made Cole seem more like the mc than my own mc so I an definitely explain a few things so it makes Damian’s motives more clear. As for the other things, I will look out for it as I edit and release new chapters, I am enjoying this feedback from people so please continue it! 😁👍

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NakedApronLv3

No prob, I hope for a nice review from you to

AstralGodZero:Thanks for the review. I’m reworking the beginning of the story to fix misunderstandings or simply bad choices i made previously. I’ve made Cole seem more like the mc than my own mc so I an definitely explain a few things so it makes Damian’s motives more clear. As for the other things, I will look out for it as I edit and release new chapters, I am enjoying this feedback from people so please continue it! 😁👍

3yr

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