Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Yeetd

The Good (+) - Simple and straightforward premise - Familiar themes in terms of setting and direction (e.g. fantasy high school, vampire, werewolves, etc) - Characters who give a similar vibe to others in books of this type, but they still manage to stand out. The Things that need some revision/rework (-) - Even though it's just a synopsis, but the synopsis shouldn't be this long at least based on what I'm reading, I feel like I was reading it as a short wall of text - A lot of the parts around the story are being told, when they could have been showed (e.g. character actions like screaming, gestures, atmosphere, etc) Conclusion: It's a novel with potential ideas, but I look really forward as to how this novel can stand out in terms of vampire/werewolf novels (and I suppose a dash of romance judging by this novel's genre). So far it's okay, but it can be better and I trust the author is doing their absolute best to give the equally best reading experience for the readers. Keep on writing, author.