Review Detail of HellWork in Reborn For A Second Life

Let me be honest, the first and second chapters were well-written it picked my interest to read more about the story. The setup of the story was unique, I mean like, I've had read a lot of reincarnation story, transmigration, reborn back into his past but this was different than what I had in my library. The MC died in his world where magic already exists, then he was reborn again but as a different person in the same world but 100 years later. Then, later it's about his growth from time to time from toddler to child, almost like TBATE to be honest. However, the best part is when he demonstrated his magic power to his friends. I mean like I'm tired of reading a story where MC wants to hide his strength in front of his friends where it actually benefits to let them know more. The magic system is well explained, as well as the principle behind it. Anyone can use many elements fire, water, wind, or earth as long as you have the Affinity for it. For how the magic works, it's simple to understand, the mana must be transformed from the surrounding into pure mana that is the mana that your body is capable to have in. Meanwhile, to unleash the magic, you have to convert back the pure mana into the specific Affinity that you want it to be, if fire then it must be fire mana. The theory behind each magic is cool. However, the story pace is kinda slow and you rarely update the story. I hope you can update it regularly. I'm keen to know more about the story leads to. This novel is promising and I recommend you guys to read it.