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Andrew_King_8690
Andrew_King_8690Lv153yr
2021-06-24 02:53

I don't really leave reviews so let's start there. first the sentence structure seems really basic which is fine as it keeps it simple and easy to grasp at times. though I think some of it is to really reach wors count which is understandable. -takes time to really introduce the world which can be boring at times but provides a solid background to the characters and world immersion that many stories dont on here. -can tell thought went into each of the characters as none of them really seem wasted -progression is at a solid pace now for story can tell that there is thought in it and not just mindless writing. also clearly at least listens and considers comment readers have left behind. its refreshing to find an author that cares about their work and readers interest. 60 chapters in and I greatly look forward to the develop and story this world has to offer.

Blood Evolution System

Crimson_ink
4.8
259 Chs

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Crimson_ink
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Thanks for the review. I write simple sentence structure(which aren't mostly simple but are easy to understand) because if you use an editor/Grammar software etc you will 100+ mistakes in the top novels MVS, Gods eye, Bloodline system, demon system and so on. So yeah, better simple than hundreds of mistakes...

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