I'm normally a silent reader and rate books that I think are phenomenal, however with this one I think it has potential to be a great story. From what I've read so far there are just so many typos, spelling mistakes, grammar and punctuation errors that it makes it difficult for the reader to understand what's actually happening. I normally don't fuss with this too much but at times it is difficult to understand what the author is trying to imply. Also there are some things about the main character that is repetitive and is mentioned in almost every chapter (upto where I've read so far). Its a little annoying to be reading the same back story of the character in every chapter. I do like the plot so far and just hope these small errors can get solved so it's easier to read.
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