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Review Detail of poziomowiec in Secretary of the Empress

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poziomowiec
poziomowiecAuthor3yrpoziomowiec

Author review I hope all of you will like this novel if you start reading it, but u can't put less than 5* in Stability of Updates as I know if something unexpected will happen I will publish at promised hours. Rest 1* as nothing more I can expect from being my own worst critic. About the story its POV novel (where from time to time POV change but for the most part it will be Joe's one) which I hope you would like to read, and it will become interesting.

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Secretary of the Empress

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blackrue
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I liked to read Joe pov.. but ur writing need some editing and a splash of grammar .you mentioned Joe went to bathroom . In achap u mention it like least 2 max ,5. You don't break senetnces . This is my suggestion that it Iam not offending you

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a bit editing needed