Pretty good read. First few chapters start off great with engaging narration by the protagonist. Direction wise is very clear from the beginning, where this story wants to go to, although sometimes there can be a bit too much detail within certain chapters. My only criticism would be the world, it's there but perhaps try to spice it up a bit more with what makes the setting exclusive for this novel. So far so good. Keep up the good writing.
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