Review Detail of BlaccLotus in The Magician Queen

The premise is nice and unique, the story telling is fresh and very comfortable to read. The very prologue you put there is very very nice as it got me hooked. So far, everything is remained mystery, kinda make one wonder what else is there. The impression and the way you introduced Jane as the lead is very nice. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge. If anything, the world building and description of things and surrounding, there's a lot of space for improvement for these as for me personally, I tend to like and need to read more of detailed descriptions to immerse myself in the story and feel the atmosphere. Overall, it's nice reading experience, good luck!