Review Detail of yu_chan_desu in HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR

Item: HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
Rating: 4.8

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yu_chan_desuLv23yryu_chan_desu

the writing style is unlike any style i've seen before.. first chapter was a whole load of info but the way it was written is so interesting. the premise of the novel is wonderful and kudos to the author!

HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR

R_F_T_S

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R_F_T_SAuthorR_F_T_S

Hehe, I guess I'm going to be getting comments about the writing style more often than not 😅 I'll try to adjust the first chapter so it won't be seen as a huge info dump thanks for the review ☺️

3yr

yu_chan_desuLv2yu_chan_desu

oh its fine actually the info dump.. it just seems like maybe it could have given more of a mystery if the important facts were given bit by bit along the way.. like giving only what is enough to keep the readers hungry for the next bit.. idk do i make sense? 😂😅

R_F_T_S:Hehe, I guess I'm going to be getting comments about the writing style more often than not 😅 I'll try to adjust the first chapter so it won't be seen as a huge info dump thanks for the review ☺️

3yr

R_F_T_SAuthorR_F_T_S

I see what you mean 🤔 I'll try to make a few adjustments in that case ☺️

yu_chan_desu:oh its fine actually the info dump.. it just seems like maybe it could have given more of a mystery if the important facts were given bit by bit along the way.. like giving only what is enough to keep the readers hungry for the next bit.. idk do i make sense? 😂😅

3yr