Review Detail of LeeMaRi1999 in HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
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I am literally new in this type of writing style. It is a little bit chaotic for me (I have only read 3 chapters, though) and I can't seem to pinpoint who are the main characters in the story. Different situations are being portrayed and the switch of scenarios are not smooth enough for readers to understand. I think that it was the author's style to have multiple perpective. .? Anyways, this is an interesting read!
HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
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Yeah, it was my decision to make use of different character perspective. I am trying to make use of the style of writing used in the popular novel, Song of ice and fire with regards to managing multiple characters xd Hopefully I can pull it off 😅 Anyways, if you read further down to chapter 6, you'd see that I placed more importance on a particular character. Anyways thanks for the review, I would take note of the flaws you have pointed out and make adjustments 😊