Amazing story. Only bad part is the grammar. This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories. Mc is smart and funny. The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities. I recommend you give this a try.

Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable. it can be improve with time. (with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.) I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities. Thankyou

First 10 chapter is good, after that is ok I guess, but the real problems is bad grammar. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..

I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses. Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director. no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily. It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.

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good story but is not getting updated anymore. Still give it a try if you are looking for some time pass.

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It seem to be dropped. Anyone found the source/raw

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