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Ali_G_7487
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2024-12-21 03:21

Alright, first off great story. However, the ending was just...asinine. The entire story revolves around the revelation that the emperor of mankind was wrong or lying in 30k when he claimed he was not a god, as he very clearly is. He himself speaks of ascending and existing within the warp as well as in his bones on the golden throne. The main character grows angelic wings that glow with divine light, summons a flaming sword of divinity to smite demons, literally feels prayers and faith flood into him as an energy source, is granted eternal knowledge of the universe, and at the end, after putting forward many reformation ideas that could vastly improve the imperium, for some illogical reasoning that I can only concur is the authors, leanings shall we say bleeding into the story, that the new order should be one of Secularism?

A Tale of Blood and Steel (WH 40K SI)

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Before anyone tries to say im am stealing I do indeed have permission and here it is

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America_Yea
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Thomas the tank engine now has a thematically accurate "upgrade" for warhammer I think it fits rather nicely here. great novel btw. glad the author gave permission.

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TheMostAbstract
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Illuviar is one of the best scifi fanfiction writers out there, glad to see more of his work here. + he gave permission. Also, WH40k is severely underappreciated on this site, we need to fix that

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Redcap_Reaper
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This is by far the best WH40K fan-fic on webnovel. Wish there were more like this. Glad the author gave you permission to share his work. can't wait for the next chapter

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Captain_Firebunny
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This is really good don’t kNow how this isn’t more popular. The characters are really good and the story is well put together the Only criticism i have is that the mc is a little to lucky but thats a common problem and that he convinces ultra stubborn space marines too easy.

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if you want any concrete reason to read this, there are other reviews. all I have to say is read it for a good time. wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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DogmaticNonsense
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I've already reread every chapter out 2-3times already The more I read the better it gets! I can't wait for more chapters, thanks for the read!

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PatientZero
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Is good, don't personally know all that much 40K lore and yet the story is pretty easy to understand, some looking up helped clear up what fog was there pretty easily

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I love this novel and i cant wait for more!.................................................................................................

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