Review Detail of Mercifull777 in Holo Alter

Honestly this is fucking amazing and I don’t know why you don’t get more clout for this. First off you have amazing world building abilities, like it is so rare to find a fic with world building as good as yours. Second off would have to be that you aren’t afraid of any lines apparently seen in your chapter for hachama, like what the actual fuck man. Thirdly would be your characters In general are pretty good, although it’s certainly not the best I would say you did a really good job with your character building and their development throughout the story. Lastly would be that you update very frequently which I love, seriously thank you for that. Btw I’m on like chapter 108 I’m a little behind but whatever.