Review Detail of Ryjn in His Highness's Little Ruby

I think that the pacing is a bit too fast. It feels like the story is fragmented since it feels a bit awkward at some times, like when did she get comfortable enough to ask for help in Chapter 5-6. There's also that intimidating wall of text, maybe try to break the paragraph a few times. Aside from that, the story is good. I see some potential. Potential that I hope it will achieve someday.