Well, the score doesnt represent my mindset about this novel... why? I hate all this AURA MOMENTUM and intimidating GAZE shit... to artificial, to forced, just so he doesnt have to break the law to act like a real robber... ita just plot armor and forced. if he wants to act like a robber, ACT LIKE A FCKING ROBBER and not just scare everyone with ur GAZE or AURA or MOMENTUM... everyone in the fcking bank knows its for a drill from the fbi and u are from the fbi. I thought this novel is promising... till seeing ghis plot armor and forcingcoupled with somany bad stereotypes. who the fck is scared of an fbi agent when u think u know he uses a toy gun and has to abide by the law since its a drill. that can happen only in bad novels... or are u scared of my gaze rn mr author? No? Why? I tried to make it EXTRA murderous.
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