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HolyDragonBr
HolyDragonBrLv144yr
2021-04-23 12:05

The beginning of showing an Isekai-style novel with a system is a bit of a cliché, but the narration of the story, as well as the introduction of the characters, was very captivating, and with this great translation, it left that desire to read a little more of the story.

I Have A Monster Rearing System

Southsky Star
4.8
40 Chs

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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

What is it with badly written novels about per raising systems. The system in this novel is totally unbalanced and any future conflict is the result of the MC stupidity. With the system the MC could gain a new skill with one pet in less than half a day. Meaning he could chose a number of low level insects and gain an exponential number of skills. 1 pet = 1 skill/day + points to gain more pets 1 skill = 300 points 1 wasp pet = 5 points 1 wasp pet = 60 new insect pets/day Even if the MC would do the most ineffective thing and only allow for new pets after getting the skill from all the old ones he would have more than 60 skills after 3 days, more than 3600 after 5 days and 216000 skills after 7 days. Meaning that after one month the MC could create a wave of upgraded insects stronger than any locust plague and he would only grow stronger with each fight. If the MC has the patience of the avarage 12 year old collecting trading cards, he can rule the entire world in a few months. Where is the challenge in that. Creating an OP system which only does not destroy the entire story because the MC is dump as **** in not the way to write a good story.

4yr

Grandmist_Sage
Grandmist_SageLv11

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

4yr
veru
veruLv11

just 5star because it has ranch system. but should i do if i can only see the title ? not only trial read has reduced chapter, even now synopsis is removed ?

4yr
chuchui
chuchuiLv10

where is the name for the raws???[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

4yr
FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5

Another idiotic Chinese MC written by a generic idiotic Chinese author designed to catch the brainless fish that can only see in front of them.

4yr
Damp_Towel
Damp_TowelLv10

The story is decent by web novel standards, and the book seem like it's going to have a more serious tone then the usual brain dead slapstick comedy. However there are some concerns that ruins the book. The system is OP, if used right the mc could've controlled the world in a month. the problem is he doesn't, I don't mind OP cheats if the mc knows how to utilize it. He is kinda dumb, but it seems like author wants him to be smart. One example is where he chooses to hunt big game over insects. Instead of capturing multiple insects and have them go hunt out in swarms for points he chooses to hunt big game himself because it's apparently more worth it. The maths states a single wasp he captured cost 5 points and over the course of 4 hours gave him more then 500 points. This is compared to hunting bigger animals which gives 100 points a pop, and usually takes hours to catch. With this it can be seen that which one is more worth it and takes less effort. in a system where there is no quantity limit the better choice is definitely to go wide with cheaper critters and exponentially grow stronger and then build your actual beasts. The numbers in the novel is also a little fudged apparently by hunting in a day with a party he was able to earn 60k points which meant he had to have killed 300-600 lighting leopards or other demonic beasts in a day that's more then 20 an hour highly improbable. Honestly I would recommend it it's not terrible through its faults.

4yr
DaoistWrC6ED
DaoistWrC6EDLv15

I cant wait to see what happens to little yellow after all those experiences points. I'm so excited for more. little yellow is so cute. great story so far keep up the hard work!

4yr
HelloworId
HelloworIdLv3

Still at 5 chapters F FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

4yr
Lubda_Hakim
Lubda_HakimLv1

it's really good just hopei g for more.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

4yr
Robin_Le_Bruyn
Robin_Le_BruynLv4

this was very enjoyable to read and it is easy to follow please upload a lot of this ik am enjoying it sjsjsjjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsj

4yr
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