Review Detail of Prommy_Halibut in Arcana Legends

I love it!!! I haven't read much books about magic systems and such, but I was really invested in your book. The ending of the first chapter made me super hyped up, and I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. Your characters seem really developed as well, and they didn't overlap— in other words each had their own individuality and originality which is amazing for a novel. The writing was pretty good overall, except the minor verb tense shifts (meaning you would sometimes shift from past to present tense). But I honestly really loved it so far, and I definitely think this novel has potential. Awesome work!!!