Nice novel, from what I've read so far, the magic system introduced feels reliable for now. Though I can't say much on it right now since this is still the early stages of the novel. Grammar: better than most, that being said maybe I'm just a little slow but sometimes I find myself confused as to who is speaking, because of the way the paragraphs are structured. Other than that it's a good read.
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