Item: A Billion Wandering Souls
Rating: 5
Author: calfikydra

calfikydraLv103yr

2021-04-05 18:47

I've read all five chapters, and i have several compliments to give to the talented author. First of all: i LOVE the length of the chapters - they are the perfect length, not too short, and not too long. Second: i love the authors writing skills, it is clear that we are dealing with someone who was born with a pen in their hands. Third: i love the idea of the story, and the whole setting. It's not my typical pick for an novel, but to be honest, it wasn't even on my mind, as i read it, because it was so well-written. Congrats, you just got yourself a new fan :) <3

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