This is a great story that I’ve really enjoyed one of the better ones I’ve seen on here. Isn’t too fast isn’t too slow either my big issue with it is that there is things that don’t really make sense and when I go back and read a couple chapters then that aren’t obvious unless you re-read that’s kind of my only big issue with it like don’t make them super obvious, butagain don’t make them so that people can’t keep updating on the story. Would love to see where it goes from here.
EnderPL
Liked it!
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