the plot with the mother is bad... making the bad guy kidnapping MC mother for a land that is not even her? the security also a problem as well the assassination in the woods where they want to bury lil bri body should teach her something. another thing is when there is a potential invasion and the MC mother order the troop to stop patroling in an area is like opening the door for the enemy on siege...
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