Review Detail of rodrigo_melo in Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
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Man, i reat like 6 chapter and man, it's was awful, these first chapters are just so boring, is literally just MC's thoughs e his future plans, man when you're doing this kinda thing you have to show his plans slowly while we learn more about his personality so his actions can be justified, and you just rushed everything, is really boring when you are reading a game of thrones FF but the aspects or tone of the story is not there. That's why i thing the first 6 chapters are just awful and rushed, i'm not planning to stop tho, but if the the next 20 chapters are bad i'll drop it. English is not my first language but i'll give 5 stars for the writing quality , didn't find many mistakes.
Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
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I though it was really boring and with a bad organized begnning, but i could get better later, i don't know, just try to read the first chapters and see if you like it.
AmarHazlin:soo..... how is it? I've been hesitating to read this book for a while now
I agree. It really bums me out when the inner thoughts are so far from GOT Vibe. It's one of the most important detail, just because it's in GOT AU & it's an FF doesn't mean you could just write it like how your write any Isekai anime novels. I've recently dropped an FF where the MC talks like he's a character in anime with the surprise shock and stammering dialogues.