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Biola_Johnson1207
Biola_Johnson1207Lv33yrBiola_Johnson1207

I normally don't read fantasy but I made this an exception because there's something about this story that'll grab your attention once you start reading. the writing quality is great. character design also great. I think the brackets are not necessary though, the sentences are okay without them. author has done a good job with this. well done

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The Incomparable

Sectra

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Sectra
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Thank you, The brackets are for the readers to differentiate his thoughts, and the voice in his head hens the parentheses and brackets.

Biola_Johnson1207
Biola_Johnson1207Lv3Biola_Johnson1207

as a reader, I can differentiate. Believe me