Review Detail of Hewwo_Jesus in DxD:lustful Princess of the fallen

I'm honestly clapping seeing how much better this is than so many of the authors other fics, Of course exaggeration is still there, but much more tame and easier to take in. A few parts on how god is super evil could be removed since GOD still has a bottom line I would like to think. Quality could still be improved, but overall this is much better than your other works. :3